First of all the cost on a classical computer of the dominant step can be improved from the $\mathcal{O}(C^2 N)$ in your question.
I managed to bring the classical cost down to $\mathcal{O}(C^{1.37} N)$ in my new answer to the question on the Mathematics Stack Exchange that you linked.
Now, you have two questions:
- (1) can a quantum computer do step 1 in time faster than $\mathcal{O}(C^{1.37} N)$, and
- (2) would this lead to an overall reduction in complexity of the entire regression algorithm?
The answer to (2) is yes, because. If your quantum algorithm improves the step withclassical $\mathcal{O}(C^{1.37} N)$, then it improves the whole algorithm because this is the step that dominatesdominates the complexity of the whole problem, and this. This is because $N$ has to be bigger than $C$ for the matrix to be invertible, which was pointed out by Chris Taylor in this answer.
The answer to (1) is an open problem.